Monday 31 January 2011

Images from Crossing The Line


Here are some still images from my short film 'Crossing the Line'. I am going to analyze all these still moments of the film in terms of Mise-en-scene, influences and reason behind the use of these shots.

SHOT 1 - John has pushes himself through the invisible barrier. Only his legs are held back by this force. He desperately struggles to cross the line completely.















I knew I wanted a shot like this from the early stages of the project. I had the idea that to make it look like the main character (John) is stuck in an invisible barrier by having someone off camera off camera lifting his legs his legs into the air. I contacted a friend of mine to me to help with this shot, so that i could stay behind the camera.

To make sure that my friends hands couldn't be seen holding the legs of my actor I needed to cut his feet off the shot. I decided to do this because as well as being a convenient way to film the shot it also seems as though the barrier which is holding the character back is represented by the frame itself. To me the edge of the frame represents the media which is holding John back.

As this shot progresses the character (John) pushes his way through the barrier. As he is doing this the monochrome effect, which has been used throughout the Forest scene so far, slowly fades away until it is completely gone after he has crossed the line. This change in color represents him going from behind controlled by the media to being free.


SHOT 2 - When first entering his unconscious state of mind he opens his eyes.














This shot is the first time that we are introduced to the Forest scene. This shot is a close up of John opening his eyes. When John's eyes are first introduced to the light his pupils shrink which reflects his perception on what is real and what isn't decreasing.

The whole idea of this shot was influences by the TV show LOST. In the first ever scene in LOST there is a close up shot on a characters closed eye which is slowly opened. The shot in crossing the line has been done in a very similar way to LOST as can be seen below:












SHOT 3 - John makes his way through an office corridor to his business meeting. He is surprised by his boss.














This is one of the earliest shots in crossing the line. It consists of a tracking the main character around a corner. Once the character has gone round the corner his cheerful boss shouts 'Good morning!' out to him. Near the end of the film when John is leaving his workplace there is also a similar shot where mirrors this one.

To create both shots in this corridor where John is entering and leaving work I knew that I wanted to visually display johns urgency with a tracking shot. On the way into work John is late for the meeting, with the use of the tracking shot the audience can experience the urgency that the character is feeling as the audience are moving with him.

One problem I has when trying to film this shot was that I didn't have an easy way of creating a tracking shot without the camera shake as I did not have access to any sort of tracking equipment. After thinking about this problem for a bit I came up with the solution of using a chair with wheels to put the camera on while getting another person to pull the chair.

A second problem I has was getting the timing right between tracking back, keeping the character in a clear shot and making the boss visible when poking his head out of the door. This took a few attempts to get just right.


SHOT 4 - The camera slowly zooms out revealing the blood near Johns head.













Similar to shot 3, this shot also mirrors the first shot in crossing the line where we see a close up of John's head, he is smiling. In the this shot we zoom out from Johns face revealing the pool of blood next to his head.
The use of this and the shot at the beginning create a non-linear structured narrative rather than a typical hollywood linear structure. Crossing the line has a non linear structure because the end of the film is shown at the start of the film.
I added a brightness effect to this shot and the shot at the start to the ending a sense of happiness even though the protagonist is seriously hurt. As well as making the audience feel happy it also reflects the way the character is feeling.

SHOT 5 - A medium shot. John has crosses the line and is very happy. He stands and celebrates with the sun directly behind him.













This was one of the last shots filmed for crossing the line and is set just after John has crossed the line. Originally, I planned for it to start raining after John had crossed the line but later decided that it should be dusk instead. I decided that for the final shot in forrest environment the sun should be shining down to show that John's mind it now at peace. The characters body language was influenced by the ending of the film ' The Shawshank Redemption'.

Tuesday 18 January 2011

Creation of film score

In the next few days i plan to use a sound editing software such as 'Garage Band' to create a short piece of music which can be played in the background of my film. I plan for this piece of music to be inserted behind the footage of the main male character walking towards the line and therefore the music needs to be 'Weird' and suspenseful.

Post Production

I have now finished production/filming and am in the process of editing the footage i have collected. After watching through the footage i started to order each shot using the i-movie editing software. I then trimmed each shot to remove any mistakes made in the filming process.

Wednesday 12 January 2011

The filming process

The filming of my short film 'Crossing the line' is now complete. As planned the office scenes were filmed on Friday 7th of January and the Forest scenes were filmed on Saturday the 8th of January.

Overall, the filming process went very well, all actors were available for me to direct at the time specified to them and i already had all props and costumes ready to be used when needed.

I did encounter a few problems while filming. Firstly, there were a few continuity errors that i didn't spot while filming and have only just noticed when playing back the footage, although most of these errors are small things which would be hard to avoid such as the positioning of the sun. I hope to make the best of some of these small continuity errors by incorporating relevant ones into the plot of my short film.

For the next week or so i will concentrate on editing my film until perfection is achieved.

Sunday 9 January 2011

Screenplay

I have created a screenplay for my short film ' Crossing the Line'. The screenplay can be seen below.


Fade in:

INT. ROOM - DAY

CLOSE UP: all we can see is john's face. He is smiling.

Fade out:

(CROSSING THE LINE)

FADE IN:

INT. STAIR CASE - DAY

FOOTSTEPS can he heard.

JOHN - early 20's - enters the frame. He treks up the staircase. His head is down and a depressed looks is plastered across his face. Every step he takes seems to take a lot out of him.

John breaths out heavily as he reaches the top of the stairs.

INT. HALLWAY - DAY

The hallway is bland.

track: we move backwards round a corner as john walks towards us.

As john walks round the corner a MAN pops his head out of a door.

MAN

Morning, John.

JOHN

(Grunt)

Yeah.

INT. meeting room - day

John enters the room.

The majority of the room is taken up by a large table. Four smart looking men sit around the table.

As John enters the businessman suddenly stop talking and there is silence as John takes a seat at the table. John seems slightly embarrassed.

john

Sorry.

BUSINESSMAN 1 begins the meeting.

BUSINESSMAN 1

Okay then, lets get started.

BUSINESSMAN 3:

Well yes the basic...

The voices of the businessmen start to fade out as John drifts into a day dream. His eyes slowly shut.

fade in:

ext. WOODLAND - DAY

John suddenly wakes in a woodland area. He laying in the middle of a clearing which is surrounded by trees.

POV: John slowly gets to his feet and takes a look around at his surroundings.

A line made of sticks and leaves stretches across the clearing. John see's this line and cautiously makes his way towards it.

OVER THE SHOULDER: john approaches the line.

Suddenly. DARKNESS.

CUT TO BLACK:

FADE IN:

INT. meeting room - day

POV: Lifting his head, John sees all four of the businessmen LOOKING AT HIM at John.

BUSINESSMAN 1

Are you okay?

John looks tired as well as slightly embarrassed.

JOHN

Yeah fine. Sorry.

BUSINESSMAN 1

(Nodding)

Okay then. Lets carry on.

BUSINESSMAN 2 smiles and continues to speak.

BUSINESSMAN 2

Our customer loyalty is higher than ever...

VOICES fade away and john begins to close his eyes again.

CUT TO:

EXT. FOREST - DAY

John approaches the line.

TRACK: along the line. john is standing at the edge of it.

John cautiously lifts his left hand across the line. A CRACKLE.

A montage of images appear accompanied by a CREEPY SOUND.

Before we know it, John's hand is jolted away from the line.

He collapses onto his knees.

Shocked, John looks down at his hand. It has a burn mark on it. He gets back up and stares at the line.

After a BEAT John shouts out in anger and charges at the line.

John desperately tries to get across the line but an invisible force field seems to be holding him back.

He manages to push his left arm through the barrier and over the line.

We cut away to the trees and when we return to john most of his body has past the barrier.

Only Johns legs are yet to be pulled through. He musters together all of his strength and pulls his legs and feet through. He collapses onto the dirty floor. He has crossed the line.

Suddenly things start to change. Day turns to dusk and the previous frown John had has been reversed into a smile. In fact, John can't stop grinning.

He jumps to his feet. Throws his arms into the air. Looks up into the sky.

JOHN

Yes! Yes!

FADE OUT TO Black:

CUT TO:

INT. MEETING ROOM - DAY

Again all four businessman are staring at John but this time he smiles back at them.

John jumps to his feet knocking over the chair he was sitting on.

PAN: FOLLOWS JOHN AROUND THE ROOM TO THE DOOR. john exits.

INT. HALLWAY - DAY

As we TRACK John back through the hallway. The man sticks his head out of his office again.

MAN

John, could you do me a favor?

JOHN

(Cheerful)

Bye.

John continues walking and exits the frame. The man is stunned.

INT. STAIR CASE - DAY

John approaches the staircase. As he takes the first step, his heel twists and john falls forward. He hits his head on the banister and rolls down the rest of the stairs.

Silence.

An empty staircase.

A blood dripping from the banister.

CLOSE UP: all WE CAN SEE IS JOHN'S face. he is smiling.

ZOOM OUT: AS WE GET FURTHER FROM JOHN'S FACE WE SEE THE BLOOD AROUND HIS HEAD. JOHN IS DEAD.

FADE OUT TO CREDITS:





Tuesday 4 January 2011

Shooting Times

In the previous video blog i said that i would be shooting over Christmas but unfortunately due to bad weather and Christmas event i was unable to gather the actors needed.

The new shooting schedule is as follows:

  • 7th January 2010 - Meeting Room and Stair shots. This will involve Main Male character in the meeting and the Main main character entering and leaving the meeting.
  • 8th January 2010 - The 8th is a Saturday. Me and the actor i am using for the male male character will go to the Forrest set and shoot Forrest scenes.

Animatic

Below is the animatic for my short film. I'm not the greatest artist in the world but I tried to make each shot as detailed as possible.